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Right Now v2 -tjw

twesselstwessels
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http://files.me.com/tyler.wessels/vy1jxc.mp3


I added a second verse of lyrics; another guitar part to break it up a bit...it seems to be a lot closer now. It would be great feeling to actually finish one of these songs. :-)

-tjw
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  • partchpartch
    Yeah man that is much closer! You should be proud of yourself that is one catchy tune front to back. My only suggestion is Which I'm sure your gonna do anyhow? take the song out a few more bars at the end & hit the last 2 chords to resolve the song. other than that pretty much a done deal! Like what you did with the vocal in the disatent tension part of the song. Just everything is more polished & flows nicer. I will say the chorus of this song is very catchy a great hook it stays in your head. I have found myself singing it. To me that says something when a song sticks in your head. great job Tyler 8)
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  • RawbRawb
    Tyler, Nice! I agree with partch and pete you got something there I like it don't mind if I download it? WTG! Man, I wish I had 1/2 your talent bro.

    May I suggest instead of just ending the song just fade it out at the end?
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  • tucopeattucopeat
    Ty, you have got a real hit on your hands here. this version is very close to a finished tune. I liked the turnaround/ bridge you put in at around 2:30, it breaks it up nicely. The lyric is good, they work well. The only suggestions I might give are: crank back the pitch correction on your vocal, you don't need it, you have a good voice, and it is pretty noticeable, especially in the beginning of the tune. For the ending, I would either fade out or resolve the acoustic back to the root chord, the ending is a little to abrupt. This is a really good tune with a really catchy hook, good work. Keep it up.
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  • twesselstwessels
    I agree about the auto correction on the vocals...I lean on that a bit at times when I want to get an idea recorded and my voice isn't cooperatin. :-)

    But I totally agree that very little or no auto correction in this song is appropriate. I'll be working that this week. I plan to fade out the end of the song; thanks for that suggestion.

    I put a new version in the main forum called right now v3, you guys can grab it here also if you like.

    http://files.me.com/tyler.wessels/xsm4au.mp3
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