Right Now -tjx

twessels

http://files.me.com/tyler.wessels/vy1jxc.mp3

It needs another verse or two of different lyrics; its a framework anyway.

-tjw

Rawb

that was some nice listening. Sounding real good there. Wasn't ready for the abrupted ending....LoL

partch

Indeed a great start to another tune Tyler 8) Not sure I liked what you did around 2:20? could work with the song, just needs something else there not sure. Maybe an agressive vocal part or something. Like the guitars quite a bit. very nice riffs & Harmonics. The distorted guitar that sustains chords what for amp model is that? I like the sound of that guitar has a powerfull, sustaining sound. What for acoustic do you play? Do you record it direct? Anyhow man I dig your sounds. You have obviously been doing this a while eh?

tucopeat

Very nice Tyler, you've have the foundations of a hit here. All you need is to finish the lyrics and work out something cool for the lead break. The overall sound is very modern and today. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to the finished version.

twessels

Its proving difficult to take a catchy phrase and trasnition into another part without it being abrupt. I guess this is where that lack of understanding theory is biting me. :-)

-tjw

Joatmon

Great tune. You sing good enough not to use so much pitch correction on the vocals. It's more noticable in the beginning of the song.
Liked it. 8)