Just One Touch - A Remake

Moxioron

http://www.digitech.com/soundcomm/patches/GNX4/JustOneTouch.mp3

DISCLAIMER: Vocals may cause permanent hearing damage! :oops:

Feedback on music/mastering/mixing is much appreciated

Guitar:
-Me using an Epiphone Les Paul
-My bro using a Fender Telecaster
-GNX4 - ALX LFSO patch
-Guitar Rig 2 - For the spacey sounds
Drums:
-Me using a Roland Vpro with TD20
-MIDI/Stylus RMX for other percussion
Bass:
-My brother using an Ibanez bass
-Guitar Rig 2 - bass effect
Vocals:
-Me using Sony ACID Teenage radio effect and some delay
-Used Melodyne on some parts to try and create a harmony.
Lyrics:
-Me - a longing spiritual thirst

partch

Man cool tune 8) Welcome bro! Anyhow I like this tune, well written, well played & mixed. I dig the message & your vocals are fine!! I think the Dynamics are cool in this tune, makes it very interesting the whole way thru 8) Anyhow I agree just one touch I hunger for that touch as well!! I'll be looking for more from you!! Great post 8)

thatsastrat

Cool mix! I liked all the different layers. It made it interesting to listen to. Good job!

shredd

Welcome to the show. There's some womderful prizes waiting for you offstage. Thanks for participating!
That said...really good job dude! I really enjoyed it, especially since MY vocals make me sound like the love child of Gilbert Godfried and Fran Drescher.
But overall, very good stuff - good mix, good sounds, nice melodies/harmonies, transitions and changes in mood...I really liked this.
The only opinion/criticism I'd offer is that the Lifeson patch doesn't quite fit into this toon..something smoother woulda been nice. (and that's coming from the biggest RUSH junkie in existance!!!) And...your voice is actually pretty dam good. I'd experiment with differnt sounds/mixes/effects, specific to each tune.
And your songwriting is really good!
Keep up the good stuff, and post for us to hear!

Moxioron

Thanks for feedback. I really appreciate it. I will mess around abit and maybe use a different patch.

Thanks.

shredd

VERY far-out avatar. Seek substance counseling.

Moxioron

It's kind of 'hulkish' .... that was the intent anyway ... or it could be 'Shrekish'... :roll:

shredd

I LOVE Shrek. Besides, anyone that ugly that can hook up with Cameron Diaz, gives me hope and a reason to go on.

Rampage

Moxoron, Welcome to the forum. Nice mix and really good song. IMO you need a kick butt guitar riff right after the break in this to break the song up a bit. Thae guitar sounded awesome but there wasn't enough of it. Throw in a killer lead and then break again and come back in where you left off. Really good job and nice song.