Aberraeshun - Greed

jamielc33

Just a little piece I worked out this morning before work. Thought it sounded nice and wanted to share it. Pay no attention to the lyrics LOL. A prime example of why you shouldn't write a song in twenty minutes ;o).
I plan to work on this one to make a real song of it but maybe some feedback from you guys will point me in new directions.

http://www.digitech.com/soundcomm/guitar_view_music.asp?productid=199&music_id=2856

Anyway, let me know what you guys think.

partch

Man Jamie, Nice post!! Thanks for sharing 8) Got my day off on the right foot My only thought is this you did that in 20 min WOW I can bairly get hooked up set up & make a take on something in 20 min I think it is great Love the Tones on the guitars & your singing seriously is not bad at all Just had a cool feel to this tune, I liked it!!

jamielc33

Thanks Partch. I didn't get many replies or views on this song so I guess that means it bombed. Ah, well, back to the drawing board .

partch

Jamie I don't think that is true at all. This song was very cool. It can get overlooked very eazy when people are posting alot & yours keeps getting pushed further down the list. A couple of sugestions: Become a bigger part of this forum post to it review the topics add your ideas & thoughts or discussions, so others get to know you. Deffinetly if you do nothing else listen to & post with honesty to others music & they will begin to respect you & do the same for you I made a committment quite some time ago that I was going to listen to all songs posted to music section & review them with how I honestly felt about it. I think if you do this more people will listen & review your music!! Don't give up bro I like your stuff, you are very talented plug into this forum & become part of it on both ends contributing & listening

jamielc33

Thanks for the suggestions Partch. Will do !

SlashNBurn99

That was real cool, you have a lot of talent.

Top stuff

Post some more.

Partch is correct btw.

I've seen fellas post on here, and there stuff has been really good, but they don't comment on other peoples stuff, so they eventually dissapear into the void

I actually listened to this and was gonna comment but forgot.

0Dannyboy

:twisted: Starting out it reminds me of Maiden (Iron that is) Its a Rawker for sure. 8) nice post. :twisted:

jamielc33

\0Dannyboy\ wrote:

:twisted: Starting out it reminds me of Maiden (Iron that is) Its a Rawker for sure. 8) nice post. :twisted:

Thanks ODB. Yeah, I kinda' felt that it had a Maiden vibe at the beginning and middle parts too.