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This really sad song

Hi Guys.

I need to check in more but I didn't have anything monumental to say. I just finished writing this really sad song about a kid who’s step dad never had any time for him. So don’t laugh.
I posted it a couple of places and asked if anyone wanted to do a version of it for reasons not to be disclosed. I'm thinking that a copy of it playing in the background while the lights are low would really get the little lady to .... well, you know..... 8)

You Were Always on My Mom

I tied to treat you like my father
I really tried to be your son
I wanted so to please my mother
Despite the nasty things you've done

I wish we'd played a little baseball
like the other dads and sons
But you were always on my mom
You were always on my mom.

It wasn't drinkin too much whiskey
or the foul smell of your breath
not the way you stained your britches
you nearly diddled mom to death

But for me you never had the time
No you just never had the time
'Cause you were always on my mom
You were always on my mom

Tell me
Tell me that you'll take the time to bathe
And give me
And give me one good reason you should stay
a reason you should stay

Think of things you could have done
But you never took the time
'Cause you were always on my mom
You were always on my mom

Comments

  • NOT laughing. That's a really dark song. Any music written for it?
  • \shredd\ wrote:
    NOT laughing. That's a really dark song. Any music written for it?
    I don't think they are that dark.. just a slam against a self centered drunken lothario.... and in that context it kinda brings a chuckle.. with alot of truth and reality for alot of people... :cry:

    :shock: They (lyrics) could be darker .. like, say .. about a football coach :!: :shock: :shock: :shock:

    Or they could be about a woman you love.. like .. say, a Willie Nelson song :?: :idea: That's why I couldn't do a version .. have his words an melody in my head!

    Weird Al be proud of ya Slacker G :!:
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