Almohada (Pillow - Re-recorded)
Please let me know what you think of this overall mix. What could make it sound better? Any feedback would help. Thanks guys!
http://www.digitech.com/soundcomm/patches/GNX4/Almohada1.mp3
Here is the first version of the song in case you'd like to compare:
http://www.digitech.com/soundcomm/patches/GNX4/Almohada.mp3
Oh and it is in Spanish so here is a rough translation of the lyrics:
Love as ours there are no two in life
no matter how hard one looks, no matter how hard one hides
you sleep with me all of the nights
you remain silent without no reproach
for that reason I want to you, for that reason I adore to you
you are in my life all my treasure.
Sometimes I return drunk of anguish
I fill you of kisses and caresses
but you are asleep you do not feel caresses
I hug to my chest I fall asleep with soon then I-awake
but your not with me there is just my pillow.
Sometimes I watch to you silent and absent
and I suffer in silence like many people
I wish I could scream for you to return with me
that if I am even alive it is just to love you
but everything happens and to the sufferings
as to the words the wind takes them.
For that reason I return drunk of anguish
I fill you of kisses and caresses
but are asleep you do not feel caresses
I hug to my chest I fall asleep with soon then I-awake
but your not with me there is just my pillow.
http://www.digitech.com/soundcomm/patches/GNX4/Almohada1.mp3
Here is the first version of the song in case you'd like to compare:
http://www.digitech.com/soundcomm/patches/GNX4/Almohada.mp3
Oh and it is in Spanish so here is a rough translation of the lyrics:
Love as ours there are no two in life
no matter how hard one looks, no matter how hard one hides
you sleep with me all of the nights
you remain silent without no reproach
for that reason I want to you, for that reason I adore to you
you are in my life all my treasure.
Sometimes I return drunk of anguish
I fill you of kisses and caresses
but you are asleep you do not feel caresses
I hug to my chest I fall asleep with soon then I-awake
but your not with me there is just my pillow.
Sometimes I watch to you silent and absent
and I suffer in silence like many people
I wish I could scream for you to return with me
that if I am even alive it is just to love you
but everything happens and to the sufferings
as to the words the wind takes them.
For that reason I return drunk of anguish
I fill you of kisses and caresses
but are asleep you do not feel caresses
I hug to my chest I fall asleep with soon then I-awake
but your not with me there is just my pillow.
Comments
I like it. I would bring the vocals up in the mix (just a little) I like the guitar sounds too. Maybe do some left to right panning for the solo parts.
I have played the song 3 times and it's better every time.
(I only speak English)
But I understood the tune. Your musical talents are pretty damn good.
Good Guitar and really good Bass too. Keep it up bro.
I bet you're a great live band 8)