Abide In Me Re do
Hey all redid this first ever original song. I thought it was whorthy of some Improvement & Some additions! Songs about our helplesness without God. Refference the Bible John Chapter 15. Let me know what you think? Thanks Guys!
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I remember when you first posted this. The mix is much better than in the begining. Now I will give my honest opinion on the rest. I don't think the drums are right for this in the begining. I hear maybe just a side stick and hi-hats until it builds some. The bass line is so close with the guitar that I did not hear the bass till later in the song. Maybe alternate in some lower notes with the ones you are using to bring in the bass more. The last thing would be to run a de-esser on the vocals. These are just some things IMHO that I think could make the song a little more dymamic.
Not that I think I could do any better at it.
Happy Holidays to You and family.
You've improved your mix a lot a lot from what you use to do.
Tip: Bring your volumes on your mix channels a little lower and master
your final wav file with a compressor. It will smooth out your highs a little better. (Your cymbols sound a little saturated)
Louder is not always better.
Keep going. Good Job.